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4/10/2008
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Orgasm Poem


How do you capture an orgasm in writing?

Ellipsis. . . . .
(too minimal)
Stars * * * *
(too splashy)
Dashes- - - -
(too linear)
Ahhhhh
(too dental)
Uuuuuu
(too vague)
AAAEEEEIIIIOOOUUU
(too vowelly)

An orgasm is like a flowing river

Sometimes smooth and shallow
Sometimes deep and slow
Sometimes spinning and splashing
Like white water rapids
Always with flow, flow, flow.

Noise is good.
Expression beyond words.
UUUUUUUUUU
AAAAAAAAAAA
OOOOOOOOOO

I like orgasms.
Orgasms make me happy.
They also burn calories.


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